WHAT DO YOU THINK OF MY WRITING? please help?

Read it outloud to yourself and if it sounds good and you haven't plagurized then its great, but I can't rate it on a scale because everyone has a different opinon. But personally I think its insanely good if you keep it up I bet you will have the next eragon book. just make sure time doesn't go too slow or fast as in don't take up 10 pages describing a character.